“The next day over lunch I tell Harry about the meeting. Her first response is "any hot girls?" and the second is to ask whether there were any kick-ass costumes that she could possibly sneak in and steal. I love my muse.
The second person I tell is my brother, because he won't stop teasing me about Rose; and there's no other way I can explain knowing so much about her and the others in so short a time without making it sound more suspect, so I end up telling him. His response is "any hot girls?" too, except I can hear the multitude of things left unsaid that make the statement different to how Harry meant it.
People are funny, sometimes.”
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Posting a dialog spine not in my nano (deleted scenes?) next time.
